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cytech380 5/24/2008 11:33:49 AM Total Posts: 3 | Cytech Xso Character Name:Cytech Xso Age:24 Gender:Male Species:Human Description:Tall 6'2 slightly muscular will wear anything comfortable Caucasian History: Born on Darieem he just worked oddjobs until finally he decided to go on a Adventure Item(s): 4 feet of rope Ship/Vehicle:None |
Stasis Hey Claudius... You killed my father. Big mistake. Dominion Master 5/24/2008 1:33:29 PM Level: 25 Experience: 65000 Total Posts: 691 | RE: Cytech Xso Disapproved. A big reason for requiring profiles is to show us how capable a writer you are. You haven't made a good impression. You've shown me a few things with this profile. One, your character's description is that of about a third of the galaxy. This tells me you made no attempt at creativity. Two, you didn't do any reading before joining, as Daireem is the name of the galaxy in which this RPG takes place. Everybody (with a few rare exceptions) was born in Daireem. It's which planet that matters. Three, you made no effort to properly form and punctuate sentences. It is very difficult to read your posts like this. (It is, in fact, a rule to write proper, or at least close to proper English.) Furthermore, you made an in-character post without your character approved. This is also a rule breakage. |
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