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Crazyleo 6/7/2008 10:55:02 AM Total Posts: 1 | Mobile Assault Unit Character Name: Mobile Assault Unit Age: 1 (Recently built) Gender: Male Species: Android Description: Stands around 6'. Has bulky features but is roughly humanoid in apperance. The head where the brain is located doesn't appear to be human, but instead looks similar to the cylons from Battlestar Galatica (classic) The arms are the mounts for it's weapons; which can be configured for any situation. The shell for the Mobile Assault Unit is made of a composite material with plated steal. The colour of the shell is matte black with silver highlights. The visual system is crimsom red. History: The Mobile Assault Unit was created by Byte Inc as a prototype security unit. However, this unit somehow escaped and now finds itself on another world (ST's choice) with little to no equipment. Ship/Vehicle: None ((Hope that helps. Still somewhat of a newb when it comes to PbP )) |
Stasis Hey Claudius... You killed my father. Big mistake. Dominion Master 6/7/2008 2:40:06 PM Level: 25 Experience: 65000 Total Posts: 691 | RE: Mobile Assault Unit Hello! Welcome to Daireem. There's a couple problems with your profile. The description is a little lacking. Right now I can't really picture him in my mind. Does he have artificial skin or a metal shell? If the former, does he have some kind of clothing? If the latter, is it metallic or matte? Does it have any color? Stuff like that. You don't need to be super detailed, but enough to get a rough image in the reader's head. And "unknown" is never acceptable. There's really no reason for age to be "unknown." Get those sorted out and you'll be in business. |
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